Im making a relay thread.

Cause.
Expect to see a lot of borrowed opener, cause I suck at openers :S

And also, I need feedback. Should I do one per post? Multiple? what?

First one:

That first kick looked weird but the damage it did was good. The second kick could have been improved to become a boom instead of a plain decap, and u looked like u had a hard time getting to ur pose. Here's a replay of what I edited.

Thanks spar ;)

Heres another.

That's one weird opener. I didn't really like that kick mainly because it could have gotten a bifurcate w/ the legs if u aimed it right(example below). Following that was a weird hug/headbutt and then finally, a stiff pose. Coulda laxed the shoulder to make it look less stiff.

Spar, w'addya mean? Both shoulders were relaxed (Or atleast where they woulda been relaxed) and You dint get both legs. You got a bifurcate and 1 leg.

Stark, What he is saying is aim to closer parts of the body for nicer and indeed cleaner dismembers. I Think thats what spar is saying.. ~Miku

Thank you Miku. I'm horrible at explaining stuff.

Yay! Thanks guys ;) New one here, Its buggy, because my TB crashed when I saved it... But you can kinda see what goes on.

Bump. Anyone?

Bump..again...? No-one?