Toribash
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neato, I did another mad man.
Here is my 2nd Mad man. Please comment, rate, flame as much as you like

I am happier with this then the last.
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secondmadman.rpl (178.3 KB, 40 views)
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love the decap

8/10

I just dont like the end.. i made a stupid edit. Its slow but i like it
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Ackman-StupidSlowEdit.rpl (191.2 KB, 15 views)
I think you should ask someone's permission before you edit their replay.

Nice replays but your madmen need more fluidity,you know,not so stiffness.
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yargh... I find it quite neat, actually... pity it reminds me of how much I actually suck at toribash ;_;
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on topic: Better! There is enough energy here to warrant 7/10. I'd like to see

-more consistent striking (focus on the follow through a little more perhaps?)
-unlock your elbows!
-if you focus on keeping your balance, the strikes will come easier and be more powerful
-more destruction

Keep up the good work, m8.

off-topic: I think replay editing is okay, especially if it's in the form of criticism as in ackman's post. He said he didn't like a part, and then he explained, partly using the edit. personally, I welcome this for my own replays, but it's just personal preference I guess.
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Thanks for the comments guys. I didnt mind the edit, but I do like the last kick in the original a whole lot. The added DM's you gave it were nice though. Im going to start trying to do more relaxed stuff, maybe get a bit more suave in my replays

Also, thanks for the tips mMm, I need them.
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Hey thar, much better than your first, good job

I made an edit, maintaining your kick. I saw how many extra frames and parts available to break so I chased uke's body down and did some stuff. Sorry if it's a different style than yours :P

Oh, and apologies for not making it better, I'm rather rusty right now :<
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JD - Deady Edit.rpl (285.4 KB, 9 views)
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that's great! In my replay I actually tried to go after the body but got too lazy to do it. No apologies needed, good show
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