on topic: Better! There is enough energy here to warrant 7/10. I'd like to see
-more consistent striking (focus on the follow through a little more perhaps?)
-unlock your elbows!
-if you focus on keeping your balance, the strikes will come easier and be more powerful
-more destruction
Keep up the good work, m8.
off-topic: I think replay editing is okay, especially if it's in the form of criticism as in ackman's post. He said he didn't like a part, and then he explained, partly using the edit. personally, I welcome this for my own replays, but it's just personal preference I guess.