I don't really see much of a difference on this one.
Everybody toe jumps these days, but I have no right to complain as I do these sometimes.
Anyway, your arms are a bit stiff. If you were just gonna do a simple flip like that, why jump so high? I guess it can't be helped on -22 grav.
Also, using relax all won't make a replay look better. It's like putting a polar bear in the savanna. It simply won't blend in well with everything else. It's necessary to know when to relax or hold a joint to make a replay look better.
I can't really say much else since it's just 1 flip. Try to do more and I'll reply with more.