Meh, you frapsed some garbage replays, added what is surely a game soundtrack over it, and some lame text. If you won't do text right, don't use it at all. Also, why does it slow down every second or two?
Okay, well uhmm...I think that the video is really bad. I mean, from someone who 'can edit much better then many toribash editors' you did a pretty bad job. You have the cursor on the screen and also some text left with the frames, and also, who uses arial in their videos? One thing I admit is that your sync was pretty good. The replays are just horrendous and why'd you put the hampa textures on the player? If this is better than many toribash editors then I don't even want to know what other videos are out there.