Here I have my shizzy replays, Rate, Comment and Enjoy!

http://forum.toribash.com/attachment...2&d=1388611253

Opener was a little simple i think.
Split was nice, liked it.
The decap tho, i didn't like it that much.
The last DM was also pretty cool.
No pose tho.

Yeah I know.. didn't have enough frames to do a pose,

Have you seen the other one then? and thanks for the feedback

replay update, CnC is appreciated, Thank You

Replay update, CnC Is appreciated, enjoy!

Updated with pose

Replay update, It's just a wip so far.. still working on the last dm...

I'll post the full one when it's done

Updated with the done vers

Kick_Kick_Kick: Try not to be stiff for a while at the beginning. Opener was slow and took you long enough to get to uke First dm was good, try not to let go of uke and make more dms, then it's the time to let go. You were able to destroy uke but you didn't do much with your engagement. Pose was good. I would have preferred one that was horse stance.

The_Horny_Uke_Done: Opener was ok, the grab wasn't really necessary, try to come to uke no matter how far he gets. The kick was good. Looked like a boom there and a punch to the pec which made it dm was cool, however. I didn't like the decap there because it ruins your whole flow (thanks to ABD) I was expecting a kick at that point but you seemed to keep on going, good job. The boom to the abs was crazy because the lumbar was flying so high. No pose though at the end. You just seemed to do a handstand and continue.

The_Pony_Likes_It_Rough: The opener was good and the turn too. The jump there was so high, reminded me of Bisonic's jump. And you did the exact same thing which wasn't "copying." Just try to add some other actions to your local move. Decap was rough and cool. But a pose fail at the end xD

The_Uke_Riper_: The jump was good, but the beginning made me feel that you were just random clicking your opener The decapitation was simple. But you didn't do much with uke. Surprisingly this is the whole cnc of this replay. Work a lot on your replays!

And *ahem*, you're welcome.

I'm working on a manip.. I think x) Anyway it's just a wip, Enjoy and comment, thank you

Manip Wip - Beginning was a bit slow, but I liked the way you released grab and grabbed him with the other Anyways, I don't think you have much room for any more work, 150 frames? :P

I have enough work for a kick or something x)
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well it's done untill the dm now I just need to work out a pose