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[VID] Masterpiece 2014


I am really proud of this and would like some CnC.
Last edited by Fenris; Jan 5, 2014 at 05:35 PM.
I really love the transitions between 0:24 and the part at 0:09
Sync's incredible for a 1ce, but it's a little boring with the lack of effects, I'd suggest adding more next time.

The colour correction is perfect, I can see you used magic bullet looks V420evoblazeitedition, but there are some problems, such as the lens flare looking a bit odd and not bright enough. I do love the text you're using though, it's high quality and actually readable unlike some videos.

Good work on the video man
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Originally Posted by notnoob View Post
I really love the transitions between 0:24 and the part at 0:09
Sync's incredible for a 1ce, but it's a little boring with the lack of effects, I'd suggest adding more next time.

The colour correction is perfect, I can see you used magic bullet looks V420evoblazeitedition, but there are some problems, such as the lens flare looking a bit odd and not bright enough. I do love the text you're using though, it's high quality and actually readable unlike some videos.

Good work on the video man

Thanks I worked really long and hard (hue) on this video, atleast 20 minutes
Is this a test or something? It was a bit too bright. The choice of music is perfect (Savant - Syko ;) but with that music you need boom hits . If this was just a test then fair enough, I like the tori and the sun but maybe the sun should be black, it would look pretty nice.
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