Edits
Water - I give zero fux.rpl
Opener looked a tad bit awkward, don't like how you changed direction in the first few frames.
The spin that before the grab was meh, could have been more well executed.
The arms and decap looked a bit iffy.
The part after that makes me fustrated. Really slow and awkward.
also dont like the way ukes head touched you after but that doesnt really mater.
I felt you could have done something after the decap and arm dms, instead of just getting into that pose could have done something a bit more VVVV
Don't really like the pose either, ending was really slow.
opener was twitchy and boring.
the pec skeet was something different but would have been better if i actually decaped uke instead of uke being decaped from gravity.
movement was ok but really twitchy.
dont like how you raised and lowered arms around frame 356
pose was really gross and ugly
gj?
tbh i like the replay more before this one.