Toribash
Original Post
Give Me a Mark ^^
could you tell me any problem I got and put a mark in post please? ^^
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I'll rate the bimbam. Opener not super stylish, but I'm ok with it. After that you're smashing uke in the style of grabbing with extended arms, lowering shoulders and ramming him with feet... That style works, but I don't think it's stylish so that's a minus for style.

You also took quite some damage points yourself (hitting uke with shins, not feet, touching uke with head, etc)... I think, cleaner striking is better... So that's a minus for not making clean strikes.

I'll give you a 5 - 6 of 10, at least you didn't dm yourself.