looking good. i suggest you smoothen some lines and make some of them curve (since flow works great in vector/vexel heads). some fixes would be the back of the head (that seam oh god no) and the ears (they look a bit squeezed). those little hair lines near the ear look weird; you can make loose hair lines, it just those don't look nice like that, it's like you just placed 3 strings of black color
overall it's looking pretty interesting, i'll subscribe to check out how this goes.