This is my new character Toxic/Dokuseei (Meaning Toxic and is also a side joke for the last name I have, Okuseei.)

Art inspired by the song Clover Club/ Cloba Clubbu sang by Hatsune Miku. If you want, here's the link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m_9pF...5hCMYQ&index=2
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In case it's not obvious, I kinda copied the atmo of the nightclub in ToriBash.
Here is the shot I used in case you want to see:

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Credit for some parts goes to my little brother, OmegaDark1, for the following:
Atmo idea
Eye texture
Hair render
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Programs used:
ToriBash, MMD/MikuMikuDance/MikuMikuMoving, Sai, Google Sketchup

CnC if you want.

Would you mind sizing it down a little bit so it's easier to cnc? ;o
From what I can see, you did a very good job.
I really liked the hair and the drink.
There were some parts in the shading around the neck, collar, and lower parts of the face that could be fixed. Make the shadows a little stronger.
The eye design didn't look very good in my opinion. Those colors don't mix well. Try doing brown and darker brown. Same thing with blue or green.

Irrita,
I'm not a perfect artist. And I could make it smaller but then it'd pixilate. Not a good idea.
About the shading, I can't fix that. My pen tablet is broken so it's hard to do shading. I just use a pen and layer it manually.
The eye design was my brother's idea. All complaints about that should be sent to him!! Hehe. Plus, It's supposed to look like an Easter egg. Because Spring. I don't like using common colors too much, either. My apologies!!

Ah I see. I guess that some of what I said is more opinion based.
Also, one more thing that I noticed. Her left eye is fairly low on her face, try raising it up a little.
It's a very good drawing, don't get me wrong.

Yeah, I noticed that. It's not actually her eye, it's her eyebrow! Hehehe! I guess I forgot to edit it and now it looks like the gap there makes the eye look too low. Thank you for the CnC, dude.

what's that candycane in her hair

i feel like the background draws my attention better than the girl
id work on picking your colors

what the hell is she seeing in her eye?

a room with many colours attracts the eyes around her, maybe make her more attractive or make the background unattractive

Sorry you don't like it. There was no way to fix that :/
My brother suggested the colors! Again sorry!
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Snoresville,
That's just a design. Sorry! My brother suggested it too. Very sorry.

never said i didnt like it. im just letting you know the things you can do better ;)
unless you dont want to get better! O:

I like the effort put into the boobs there.

The head seems quite huge compared to the rest of the body, though that might be the style you're going for.
I like some of those creases on their clothes and the shading is alright too.
It feels like there's a lot of empty space which annoys me, you might be better off keeping it small enough so that the bit we can focus on is the main part of the picture.

I like it anyway, keep doing these .