You should definitely work more on the mapping.
At the moment it's WAY off.
To start it off, you could use some
free heads with good mapping as a reference point for eyes, mouth, etc. Don't copy them, though. That's bad, etc.
Either way, work on that and also, lines. They're really messy. You could try to use some sort of pen tool. Haven't been using gimp for too much, so I don't really know how it's called.
Edit: Whoops, didn't notice that you already made another thread :|
Don't make multiple threads for the same piece. Either keep everything in one thread(if you post them in short intervals), or make a thread for every head, if you make them not so often(not as good of an option).
Closing thread.
Last edited by Arthur; Mar 21, 2014 at 07:42 PM.