How'd I do, be brutally honest. Salted lemon juice in a fresh cut brutal.

dont tell me what to do
you dont own me.

opener was too long

i didnt like it either, it was really random and awkward

the decap was also awkward, it made me cringe when i saw that at that kind of angle

you spent a lot of time on your hand

pose was iffy

howd i do

Brutal, just how I like it. I'll try to take these into consideration when I get around to doing more.
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Is this any better?