thingamajig:
I liked the opener
It was slow, but controlled, which i appreciate.
After that you seemed to lack balance, and you twitched your lumbar a lot. it looked kinda' funky.
Also your knees were contracted a little too much for my liking and glutes extended a bit much.
There's a lot you can do with that replay to make it lookin' gangster.
Keep it up~