Endurance Onslaught 6.0
Original Post
Very nice replay!
At around 428-420, you were very stiff with your legs, and it didn't really look good.
When you were moving through the air, you weren't actually moving joints very much, which took away from the replay a little bit.
That little brush with uke coud've been avoided, but it's nothing major.
Next two kicks were really great, awesome job!
Ryan is Straight {TGS} {Videoer} {Artist} Rip Dog
This looked pretty fluid imo.
The opener was pretty sweet. I thought you would land in an awkward position to launch yourself but you didn't so props. When you were spinning your arms were pretty stiff, which is something I like to avoid. I didn't like how you extended and contracted your left elbow after decaping uke since it was a kind of stiff and awkward movement on it's own. The actual decap itself was fine. I liked the 4-dm too, and the landing was ok. Pretty good overall.
ORMO|Retired
It was quite nice, the tricking at the start seemed to be quite fluid and I have no complaints about the kicks. Also, you've hidden that grab very well, that's always nice.