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CnC my replays pls.
I need some advice ;o
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~Nerf - One by One.rpl (104.1 KB, 28 views)
~Nerf - Sad to be You.rpl (110.6 KB, 17 views)
~Nerf - Arm Carry.rpl (65.6 KB, 18 views)
You're using too few joints for your hits. For example, when you want to kick, you just work with your hip/knee. To get better, you have to learn to use nearly all your joints to build up momentum for the hit.

That isn't to say that you should randomly try to use all joints, you've got to understand how your joints help your tori move in general so your movement becomes more fluid.
I do some videos
Feel free to PM me for any video-related questions
Thanks for the cnc :O
Some decap replay:
Btw, title is related to my flame
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Last edited by Nerfpls; Apr 16, 2014 at 02:30 AM.
I don't have much to say about this one, it's kind of average. There's nothing wrong with it, but it doesn't stand out in any way for me. You got a good amount of momentum into the first kick, and if it was placed in a better location you could have probably gotten multiple DMs out of it. The only advice I can really give is that for the transition into the pose, bringing a fully extended leg down doesn't look very nice and could have been changed into something that looked a little more fluid.

Nice flame though
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