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OMG WIP 2!!!!!!!!!!!
Last edited by Pair; Apr 15, 2014 at 07:54 PM.
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the colour correction and shader makes the tori hard to see in the third replay, black on black might not be the best choice hm?

The video is kind of choppy

the first transition is bad because it looks at the sun which ruins the smoothness of it

the second replay is bad, i dont really have to explain this one.

but the sync is on which is always a plus
Originally Posted by Augans View Post
the colour correction and shader makes the tori hard to see in the third replay, black on black might not be the best choice hm?

The video is kind of choppy

the first transition is bad because it looks at the sun which ruins the smoothness of it

the second replay is bad, i dont really have to explain this one.

but the sync is on which is always a plus

I can see the tori fine. What is your Gamma at?

Rendered on 20 fps so it wouldn't take as long to render.

I didn't bother with the transitions and the 2nd one was just out of luck.

I thought the replay was pretty good.

Thanks for cnc.
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[3:50:35 PM] Sam: I'm a lyrical, cynical, rythmical demon.
Spittin out lines like I spit out hot semen.....
Taking a break...
the only problem i have with it i guess is the colour correction, because i didnt even recognize my own tori at the start
everything else is pretty cool though, nicely done
oh yeah
going to have to agree with the color correction thing, wasn't a fan of it, too dark

transitions pls (don't care if you were too lazy or something don't make an edit if ur lazy), choppy (render in 30 fps at least), freecam was a bit wild, wasn't a fan of the song
Realized the color correction was too dark when i turned my gamma back to normal (was up so I can see in the dark on Rust) it's Fixed.

It's not that I'm lazy, it's that I like to work on sync and everything else before I add effects and smoother transitions. I often forget about some of that shit when I'm done syncing.

Again, it's a WIP so i'm not going to waist extra time rendering something that isn't the full length video. It's just a first look which gives you an idea of what the actual video is going to look like. I don't think that the freecam was wild at all (compared to my other work atleast).

The song on the other hand, was a song that I have been wanting to use for a very long time. We have different tastes in music and besides, it's too late now and I honestly think ive done a really good job with this.

Thanks for cnc!!!!
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[3:50:35 PM] Sam: I'm a lyrical, cynical, rythmical demon.
Spittin out lines like I spit out hot semen.....
Taking a break...
i dont think i like the song tbh

i like seeing me
Originally Posted by Kaneki333 View Post
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up

WIP 2!!!
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[3:50:35 PM] Sam: I'm a lyrical, cynical, rythmical demon.
Spittin out lines like I spit out hot semen.....
Taking a break...