I know my moves are not very fluid, but I wanted to post a replay just to see how I did in the forum's eyes, as this is really the first replay I have done to try to "show off" I guess. I will improve the replays as I go along, working my way up the ranks. I know the start could be much improved upon, it was kind of an improvisation. But please, tell me how I did for a beginner replay maker! Be blunt, if you wish, my feelings are not easily hurt.