Quick little project i did in Cinema 4D. Its not perfect by any means but I'm brand new to C4D so i was happy with how it turned out.

i would make the head larger then it would look better

The head is fine imo, the thighs are a bit thin for a tori though

The upper part looks ok, but the legs should get some smoothing

stupinator made a rig which should fix most of your modelling problems
http://forum.toribash.com/showthread.php?t=188623

The upper body looks fine, but the legs are too thin. You should make the legs thicker a bit, but it's well made for someone who's new to Cinema 4D. Good luck on future projects!

i dont think the whole upper body looks good either
joints are way too small and expose the torso blocks too much

neck needs to be smaller/inside the head more