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I made this using Photoshop Cs6

well, the render itself is pretty cool

but jesus, the text and background are super unfitting

The background doesn't blend with the model and the font doesn't fit.

Like everyone's been saying, the background image
doesn't correspond well with the tori, but the render
is pretty neat

render was made by Nasuke so i dont know what you did?

If you're not the creator of the tori/pose/spear please do credit (Link to him, name etc) the artist who did (Nasuke, I'd assume) or I might have to close this.

Also, did you ask for permission to use it at all?