0:08-0:10 is the only thing i like really
its way too slow, colors dont match,
shake/twitch for the buildup was tooooo long
light ray thing isnt pointing straight down and it makes no sense
0:13 was extremely borring because it was so slow and the panning was so weak i was basically just watching a tori float around for too long
ur logo following was like solid, give it some transparency and it'd look so much better in my opinion. the zoom in and out has been done about a billion times and i believe you can figure out something that looks better.
not even gonna talk about the last replay bc there was so much wrong, if its the programs fault u should probably render again, if it doesnt fix it then you did something wrong