yeah like it says i think i improved a lil bt



programs used - Sony vegas (ikr)

The first part was good

I think running too long looks ew because of lack of action but that's just me

It's not just you

Haunter, try to get feeds where the kills are pretty close together.

looks like you spent alot of time on the cinematic in the beginning but when the actual gameplay came it hardly looked edited, except for the cc

the logo thing at 0:04 is too flat, it doesn't really feel like it fits in the video
it's a cool thought tho and when you get the hang of it having logos/text and what not blended in it can create some cool depth

what organs said is partly true, as an editor you should be able to work like clips just like this one too
try speeding up inbetween the kills to avoid making it boring to watch

watching this cc all the way from the beginning makes my eyes go EH
it fits alot with the feeling of the vid and cinematic in the beginning, but after the first kill you could've made some slight adjustments, like raising the hue variety in the cc

EDIT: also i had to rewatch to understand that you got a kill because you didn't have any sound from the sniper, whilst you had it on the first shot
to be honest i think you can raise the volume of the shots

Thank you guys, I'll see if I can get much better clips or make my own