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[Tex] My Personal Set
Currently trying to get all the texture items to finish this.

Set


Constructive Criticizem Is welcome.
Last edited by Bonzi; Sep 6, 2014 at 06:12 PM.

The set is made up of lines, and the head is just one plain color. I think you should add more things than that to make it look nicer and stick out a bit more.
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I like the look of simplicity, and once I get full textures I'm making another set. And the head isn't just one plain color there are eyes behind the shades.

I would:

Make green and white switch places, i.e have white lines on green background.
Make the lines one solid color, without that gradient.
Place lines on the sides of the legs rather than the center, so as to resemble track pants.
Get rid of the eyes completely OR leave the eyes, but make the lines black instead of white.
Last edited by Odlov; Sep 6, 2014 at 08:34 PM.
Originally Posted by haze View Post
its a few barely visible lines

10/10

Im pretty sure it's meant to be a simple design. You could at least give cnc.

If you are going for a simple set it's nice so far. Though Acid may not be the best color. It's too bright to be noticed. Red might work better.
Originally Posted by Kradel View Post
Im pretty sure it's meant to be a simple design. You could at least give cnc.

If you are going for a simple set it's nice so far. Though Acid may not be the best color. It's too bright to be noticed. Red might work better.

the set is litteraly made out of 2 lines

pretty sure there's nothing to cnc

"o wow ur lines are 2green4me"

what


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Last edited by 13chillz; Sep 6, 2014 at 09:37 PM.
Originally Posted by Odlov View Post
I would:

Make green and white switch places, i.e have white lines on green background.
Make the lines one solid color, without that gradient.
Place lines on the sides of the legs rather than the center, so as to resemble track pants.
Get rid of the eyes completely OR leave the eyes, but make the lines black instead of white.

Okay, I'll give that a go.

Originally Posted by Kradel View Post
Im pretty sure it's meant to be a simple design. You could at least give cnc.

If you are going for a simple set it's nice so far. Though Acid may not be the best color. It's too bright to be noticed. Red might work better.

Eh, I like the lime green look, but I see where you're coming from.





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This is my first ever set by the way.