had my attention up until around 15 seconds
probably because everything felt repetitive like the song
after watching again
the text 'above' was very hard to see
it was also above some glass i think so add some reflection
(also 'presents' looked poorly tracked)
at 0:10 i couldnt really tell what was happening besides the xpr shot and i didnt like watching it
Last edited by cat; Nov 14, 2014 at 07:04 AM.