Toribash
I think your melody is very simple, therefore it quickly gets boring. Your 8 note loop is there all the way through which gets on my nerves really fast, and I get bored after the intro that is 1 minute 8 seconds out where you could cut it at 30. it would be much better if you did like 3-4 different variations to that short loop and repeated them 1-2-1-3-1-4-conclusion-ending format instead of going 1-2-1-2-1. You are good at making the music itself, good flow, nice sounds, but listening to this is about as exciting as watching paint dry, that is my opinion anyways.