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a bit repetetive, pause is too long in the beggining, makes it sound awkward, but other than that it sounds pretty neat
"No mortal arse can quench my thirst."
It is repetetive because it is depending on its genre (which i think is world? not sure)

I like it you made it sound realy beautiful. Though its not unique to me. Try doing something that no one did before. Would love it! 9/10