Hello.
The opener to this one was unnecesairly boring and lengthy, but as fast as you made that split shit started to go down. You got some sweet Dms and my favorite one must be the first one.
Things to improve:
-Try to make you openers less lengthy, if you want them to be lengthy then atleast make them interesting or appealing to the eye.
-Work on your fluidity, the kicks you did were great but i felt like they were pretty stiff. try to work on that.