the whole thing just does not look good
the sounds are 3000x louder than the music, which is low quality
the freecam doesn't even know what it's looking at, please work on that.
the rewind is at like 50%, use velocity to speed that up.. or use velocity at all, i don't know how premiere works.
pick up magic bullet looks and make some cc, that way you don't have to use such a bland shader
effects chosen are really boring and badly placed, they seem to be there for no reason.
less videos, mooore time spent on one video.