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[Vid] Toribash: Madman EP. 1 @YRBFilms


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Last edited by Noobie; Jun 9, 2015 at 01:26 AM.
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goddamn....
Shaky camera was used way too much imo, so was the flashing
sync didn't seem to be anywhere in sight nor did any sort of CC
no keyframes??

In all honesty there wasn't anything I enjoyed from that video.
I'd hit the drawing board and work from square 1..
2/10
Originally Posted by LucidSpore View Post
goddamn....
Shaky camera was used way too much imo, so was the flashing
sync didn't seem to be anywhere in sight nor did any sort of CC
no keyframes??

In all honesty there wasn't anything I enjoyed from that video.
I'd hit the drawing board and work from square 1..
2/10

Well, if I actually spent my time on it, it'd be better but I only spent 4 hours making this.


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Were there even keyframes? Cause it looks more like default camera and pan/crop then legitimate keyframes.

And what Lucid said, no need to be repeatitive
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This isn't actually that bad for a 1st attempt at editing that took 4 hours. You have a good sense of sync, although this wasn't done very well. Too much reliance on pancrop and black flashes which didn't look good. I'd also recommend using freecam rather than the default camera.

But yeh, I look forward to your next attempt. I recommend reading DatSkip's tutorial here first though
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the toribash video was just annoying to watch, really. use keyframes. don't pancrop it like that. use a cc. dear god stop using the pumping vignette. it looks like some old movie roll from the 50's which has gotten destroyed because someone accidently got some coffie around the frames.

for the music video, i saw a couple of seconds and then stopped. sounded like it was recorded with a telia flip phone from 2005.
M I N I V A N
The pan/crop and the black bars makes me cringe af. No keyframes too. :C
I know its ur first but still try to improve, especially on effects and the ones I said above.
Use transitions too, I really don't like the solid change in between clips.
Give me toriprime and VIP ops. TY TY

legitmately one of the worst edits ive seen
i dont even want to know why you thought this was a good idea

1/10 for sympathy because you actually managed to import the clips into sony vegas