7 for the first one, i like the start but the bit where you bring his torso over your head and he punches you in the face a lot could be better.
and 6 for the second one, could be improved if you destroyed the rest with that 100ish frames you had left at the end! that could easily be edited in though.
keep at it though and just edit edit edit
and 6 for the second one, could be improved if you destroyed the rest with that 100ish frames you had left at the end! that could easily be edited in though.
keep at it though and just edit edit edit
the first one isn't a madman, uke stays too intact. otherwise it was better than the second one, though, because it had some strikes and not just you using yourself as an uke-grater.
the second one was too slow, and you stopped for a few times, which kills the flow. although fluidity isn't a must in madmans, I think a flow to the movements, a.k.a. keeping about the same pace throughout and such, is very important.
if you wanna, you can see what I consider a madman in that link in my sig.
the second one was too slow, and you stopped for a few times, which kills the flow. although fluidity isn't a must in madmans, I think a flow to the movements, a.k.a. keeping about the same pace throughout and such, is very important.
if you wanna, you can see what I consider a madman in that link in my sig.
Originally Posted by Archlurps
the first one isn't a madman, uke stays too intact. otherwise it was better than the second one, though, because it had some strikes and not just you using yourself as an uke-grater.
the second one was too slow, and you stopped for a few times, which kills the flow. although fluidity isn't a must in madmans, I think a flow to the movements, a.k.a. keeping about the same pace throughout and such, is very important.
if you wanna, you can see what I consider a madman in that link in my sig.
LOL@ ukegrater. I agree. You kinda used your body to shred him to bits.... :o
I think the first one was ok, but you could have done with more annihilation.
