MAN! not bad, not bad at all.
the first one (gee I'm flattered
) had more DM's from you bashing uke against your body. it's not the coolest-looking way to DM uke, but better than grating. also there was quite a bit of ghosting. other than that, good job.
the second one was almost as good, but then again, it wasn't ghost-infested and you didn't bash uke with your head as much, which isn't really wise.
these were good, not far from great. just try and use knees, elbows, feet and hands for most of the strikes, eh? Or well, if you can really do a soccer-ish chest punt, Do it, but the gorilla chest pounding doesn't really work out.
anyways, good job, you've improved quite a lot.
the first one (gee I'm flattered
) had more DM's from you bashing uke against your body. it's not the coolest-looking way to DM uke, but better than grating. also there was quite a bit of ghosting. other than that, good job.the second one was almost as good, but then again, it wasn't ghost-infested and you didn't bash uke with your head as much, which isn't really wise.
these were good, not far from great. just try and use knees, elbows, feet and hands for most of the strikes, eh? Or well, if you can really do a soccer-ish chest punt, Do it, but the gorilla chest pounding doesn't really work out.
anyways, good job, you've improved quite a lot.
Thanks =D I knew you would find this sooner or later. But i just wanted to see how much i need to improve. You give me most of the critisism and advice. And i thank you for that.
Also what do you mean Ghosting
Also what do you mean Ghosting
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<apple> Fine, I love you in the gayest of ways.
<apple> Fine, I love you in the gayest of ways.
Hmmm. Pretty good! I liked the second one best. The first one was a bit irregular and kinda lacked rhythm. Also, the hesitation at the end of the second one probably could have edited out relatively easily. Other than that, they were fantastic.