Big thanks to Velair for showing me how to shade semi properly, I need a little bit more work and plan on furthering this head. what should I change?


reminder its a wip.

made in gimp

I don't like how jaggy it is, it makes it look weird when you shade like that
the shading is spotty in some places like around the nose and eyes
after that just try and work on it more

It is kinda jaggy but ill have to disagree on the shading

shading is rough, smooth would b gr8 but not all metal is smooth ; ^)


make linework not so notable.

I tried too hard to make a sharp edge, working on it

Updated OP with possibly finished product. almost satisfied with the end product, the back didnt come out too good.

I like this concept, however the jagged razor sharp chin bothers me, as well as the immediate change of line type from the mouth piece to the nose, as well as the lighting on the mouth piece is just slightly off, whether that was your purpose or not idk it just bugs me

For a second that looked like the MF DOOM mask, that'd be dope, anyway, the shading is quite rough as stated before, and those eyes just bother me, maybe it's the weird looking color? I don't know.

The unsymmetrical reflection by the mouth is killing me. Otherwise it's great.