Hey moopiiiii
-go -30 grav it'll help you at alot of points
-if you're having trouble dm'ing - hack them (not recommended, you should rather just-practice hitting vital spots on uke for bashing)
-practice madmen
-I recommend reading about momentum.
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I like your opener and the follow-up. Looks wacky in its own way, which, coming from me, is considered a good thing (because I like wacky stuff)
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