They're not bad, really. It's just that I see you more of a tricker. I'll explain why in my next comments;
The Woman Martial Artist
Opener is quite stiff (well most of the replay is stiff but that can be fixed later on) the kick is interesting, would of liked to see it hit someplace where it could of gotten more DM's but that's just me.
-Does not lack in fluidity, you follow yourself up quite nicely.
-Needs to be more relaxed.
-More dismemberments.
Just for You
This is the replay where I saw some promise in tricking:
Opener isn't bad, just a bit generic, but what you did afterwards was cool enough. What I'm talking about though is your cartwheel/roundoff into the pose which was executed quite nicely. You should try tricking sometime.
I'll give you 6-7/10 for the reasons above
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