First clip was an eyesore.
Stop cutting so much, it makes it look worse; I can barely see what was happening in that replay.(Tho, I knew.)
Second clip was finely put.
Tho, it's too plain, lacked much screen pumps and effects, don't you think?
Also, why don't you try recording and editing with max qualities, it'll look better that way. (Well, imo, that is.)