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[VID] Neglected Troubles

really happy with the outcome.

replays:
Static
Dezrai
eazi (sorry i forgot to download your set)
BquadZ7550
Dezrai
Dezrai
Dezrai

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A Lot Like Birds - Connector

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after effects cc

cnc appreciated

dont comment on the song pls ty
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Really nice, Velo isn't that good but its pretty hard to actually sync with songs like this.

I feel like the black lines move to much.

also 2 cines.

ALSSOO

The clips look a bit choppy but its probably just me.
nice work m9 8/10

Channel - ok
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The intro is very good and all camera as awesome !

Nice dude,just change a music style(trap,dubstep,rap)
this is your challenge
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Originally Posted by HVNANitrox View Post
The intro is very good and all camera as awesome !

Nice dude,just change a music style(trap,dubstep,rap)
this is your challenge

get out im not using this trap/rap/electronic stuff im not electronica
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sometimes it fells too slow,but its a good edit tought
i like the slight black bars moving
the CC doesn't seems...that good,it looks too dark and simple,i mean it doesnt really fit with this song,as the song genre is rock(it seems),an dark but glow red/fire wold looks better.
also,i like the "dirty lens" effect,its just awesome

also,HVNAnitrox: if the song is good for a edit,genre isnt anything.
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The cc is more than you think :>
so its actually not that simple lmao
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This is some badass editing. I love the ending effect. I just wish you'd change up to some more flashy transitions instead of just cutting the footage.
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cc was cash, camerawork was pretty appealing
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0:23

that shit was stellar, but the transition that came after was kinda yuck

black bars were annoying as fuck to me though
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There are some parts where you slowed down to much, wich means it leads to choppy clips. Velocity was "OK", it lacked effects, music was "Cool"

pretty good imo, but I think you should spend a little more effort on to effects cause' I think it lacked alot of effects

7/10

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Thanks everyone!

Originally Posted by TorixDemon View Post
There are some parts where you slowed down to much, wich means it leads to choppy clips. Velocity was "OK", it lacked effects, music was "Cool"

pretty good imo, but I think you should spend a little more effort on to effects cause' I think it lacked alot of effects

7/10

I've used 5 out of the 9 total clips for effects. I don't think you caught on half of them.

Looking back, I moved the black bars far too much on this one. Personally I think the velo is fine, which allowed me to experiment with a lot of things (the camera blur in the beginning as an example).
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cc was cash, camerawork was pretty appealing
also

0:23

that shit was stellar, but the transition that came after was kinda yuck

black bars were annoying as fuck to me though

Glad you liked the keyframing. Definitely one of the things I improved on since I first started and I love it in this one.
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