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[VID] Delusional
So, I made this video originally as my eP appclip ( hence the intro ) but i thought, Why not post it here aswell.



Software:
Fraps
Sony Vegas Pro 13

song: steve james - in my head
Replay makers : jisse, Larfen, dobby
Last edited by Travor; Jul 30, 2016 at 02:02 AM.
I do stuff. Havu is my mentor
the cc change and the black bars came in too rough

i cant tell if you keyframed the cc, or just split the clip and added cc on the latter clip, but you should keyframe the change

the black bars shouldve slowed down a bit before reaching their stopping point, or better yet bounce back maybe five-ten pixels

the effect at 0:19 shouldve been held out a bit more, and faded out instead of immdiately cutting it out. i feel like it wasnt really used to its full potential

the sync was well done

gj
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Thanks tsu, The effect on 0:19 is ment to look like he sprung out of the (idk what to call the sound) thing.

I agree on the black bars, and the cc wasn't really keyframed.
i think the sudden switch did fit, since the song did a drop aswell.
But hey thanks for giving me your cnc
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Originally Posted by cats View Post
hi

update your post with the name of the song and replay makers

thanks

Replay makers are in the end of the video, but sure i'll add them
Last edited by Travor; Jul 30, 2016 at 02:01 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
I do stuff. Havu is my mentor
tsuion basically said everything
but just another thing is the sync betwen the points,i guess it wold look much better if you slow down a bit more betwen them,ofc you dont need to make stop-move,but this wold make them look more fluid.
blood was other thing,wold be cooler if you deactivated them before any dm happens,then when something DM on a hit you make it appears.
besides that,its a pretty good vid
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Thanks victor I like having the blood on more than disabling-enabling it because it kinda adds to the dming
I do stuff. Havu is my mentor
Fix the shake, the beginning intro clip's shake was way more than you need.

CC could be a lot better, rn it looks kinda dirty

Your sync was alright.

Also when keyframing try to prevent things like what happened at 0:16

こんにちは、私はデータです。

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I'm not sure what's wrong with 0:16, Could help me out here?
And the CC is a cc i made my own which i thought kinda fit

Thanks for the cnc
I do stuff. Havu is my mentor
he's probably referring to the left - right - left - right motion of the camera

im a bit surprised i missed it, but i can see how it can be bad
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