Before i forget.
Decen't replay, nothing much to it beaint of the decap and the cork.
Try to refrain from doing stuff like the cork that doesn't do any purpouse into the madman, otherwise you'l just end up merging replays into halfs, you could pull that of probably but i'd say it's a better alternative to stick to etheir of the two for single replays.
Keep trying, seen the other replays and you've got a steady road for improvement,