okey
so
Starting off with a simple opener then turning it into a jump opener i dont like that ur foot is like pushed and while ground hitting it
when the swing of the leg came u lost basicly all your speed that u attained becuse u contracted it to make the "reswing" now after that u didnt jump but u turned it into a reswing then grabbed uke.... after u grabbed u re made the jumping opener to push yourself for a boom. thats a good tactic but ur doing the same thing allover again
and it doesnt look good. boom went off really clean shot then becus u threw uke in the air u lost all your speed that u had gained from the boom and u kinda struggled for the landing.This is the part where it gets bad (srry) u contract and extend ur knees a lot witch make u look wierd. I dont like that u let that leg hit ur head looks wierd and stupid...Then u get ur speed back by contracting and extending knees a lot.That kick to the ground wasnt strong enough to make you jump but instead u just swinged urself and u made that kick seem usless. Since u had ur knees bent u closed them again and went for the decap. but becuse of that jump (not really) u lost all your speed that u attained and lost by the replay. then u just dance and pose.Dont keep more tf after ur done becuse no one wants to see replays just with your pose.
Work with your flow dont do the revers of one joint ( example : u ext ur r_knee then u contract the other) do more powerful jumps
5/10