I lol'd.

Too fast though.

truely epic

what?!? are you kidding me??

dude, try and take what I keep saying into account. try harder.

the animation was way too choppy, short, fast, and it makes no sense.

why does he just fly in diagonal, then back up, straighten out, and fly away? it makes no sense.

try harder.

^--------He never lies when he talks about art also i lol'd at the vid

flying is supposed to be smooth, if it's choppy, it's unrealistic, there's no way you'd have that kind of control while flying.