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intresting...but still,there are some spelling mistakes,here,i fixed them up
Once upon a time, two toribashians were living in the mountains , they were in charge of bringing food to their village. As they were wondering in the forest looking for food they stumbled in a cave. They saw something glowing in the darkness so they decided to see what it was. They soon realized that the shining thing was a piece of platinum. They took it and brought it back to their village. They believed it had some special powers so they began to worship it as it was a god. Two days after that the piece of platinum began glowing in an unusual way. The two toribashians came too close to it and it gave them special powers. From that day forward,the clan "Platinum" was born
Last edited by Shire; Mar 11, 2009 at 09:42 PM.