Toribash
Symmetrical moves are not hard at all.
... I hope for you and the town from which you reign to be frozen by icewinds for all eternity.
hm, I suggest taking a look at some of the other threads on here. Pick one with a lot of pages, watch the replays, and try to learn from them.
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Originally Posted by Boomshot View Post
I think these Are My Best, So Screw you Guys.

I hate people who insult guys who are trying to help him

EDIT:
and those replays are really bad, symmetric and stiff
[duck] 01101000 01101001 01110000 01101111 01110100 01101001 01100010 01101111 01110010
Well, to be honest, not an awful lot of improvement here, if you ask me. You did something about diversity, but now you slipped into symmetricality. While this isn't exclusively bad, it quite nearly is. Making a symmetrical move look good is very hard, and not worth the effort.
But let me point out the other flaws:
- Stiffness. I guess you saw this one the last time, too.
- Flow. Once again, i repeat: Make your moves flow together.
- Innovation, or lack thereof. We've seen those moves a pretty big amount of times before.
Entertainment isn't a big enough issue to be listed.

I understand that you're pretty new, and that this is a pretty big mouthful, so instead of swallowing it whole, chew on it over some time. I don't expect anyone to instantly improve, and nobody else should either. Just let it buzz around in the back of your head while you're messing around.

Btw i don't actually enjoy being so critical. >.>
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Originally Posted by Boomshot View Post
I think these Are My Best, So Screw you Guys.

Why would you make this thread if you don't want constructive crit?

With this in mind I'm not going to post anything constructive, just opinion.

Typically noobish.

EDIT:: nice effort shook. Lets hope you aint berated for it
Last edited by Ern; Mar 31, 2009 at 07:24 PM.
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yeah at least you appoligized.

but yeah you need to do different things on both of your bodys sides.
and have different things in each replay not just decaps and splits.
if you want to get better try watching these people
oracle
war_hero
Ern
wildbox
shook.

you will get better....I did.
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