well i dont know if this is good comment please

that was pretty nice.Idk why it came up on 3.593 though.

5/10 Was too stiff and had no style.

It was alright, it was a bit slow and as hanzarce said there wasn't much style to it. Try to shorten the gap between the dm's to make it faster and more stylish.

ok thanks for the comments ill try to do another one

okay my 2nd attempt

This one is a huge improvement - the dm's were faster and it wasn't stiff, try and make it a bit less grabby and that could be a very good madman

thnks i appriciate it