I was asked to make a poem about wushu. So here it comes:


We launch into the air,
We welcome you to our lair,
We ask you to not dare,
To say we are unfair.
You ask if you can stay,
We wont care either way,
Its how we spend the day,
To keep our thoughts at bay.
We spin at our great speeds,
We satisfy our needs,
And now its us who feeds,
Our hungering soul of greed.
We fight until the end,
Your honor you must defend,
Our goal to always mend,
Our atleast we will pretend.
We are the strong we are the wise,
We bring our foes to their demise,
We will never be civilize,
We ask the best to rise.
We are wushu.

some of it seems forced...but good overall

LOL,nice

How is poetry art?

Duh?
Ok, let me explain, in the good ol' days, far back in the days. When people could "draw", paint or dance, yes dance, then they had to do something else to express themselves, so peotry was made. Poety goes under art, same and story writing. Especially if the story is fiction/fantasy.
Someone has said that "Art using your creativity to create something".

can i just point out how incredibly weird it is to make a poem about a toribash mod...

would be an alright poem if it was about something normal, like nature or girls

Requested. And Im cool with it. You make poems about things you express passion about. Thats TB for me.

its good but slow at moments and yes Most of the poems I do are about love (its natural) but this is a good idea.

shouldnt the line we are the strong we are the wise have a comma after strong?

How is it not? Anyways, i liked it Im a wushu guy myself. Hope to read more poems from you!