Endurance Onslaught 6.0
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[POEM]element poem
im not in Element but I got board and kind of wrote this poem. its off track and random I know... but it kind of gives it spoof. if you have any C&C please.

these are the elements in the clan and I kind of connected them all together.


[ELEMENT]

FIRE
Engaging, consuming, merciless, and bright
Hot coals and embers burn
Everything you love will have no life
Coursing through every plant or bush
It grows in power and strength
Farther it goes into the world
But with enough water and luck it will come to an end



WATER
Relaxing, and cooling, surging, and bare
Covering everything in its path
You will feel its power with no fear
Power coursing through your veins
The farther you walk the more you will need
Addictive it is but in time it is worth it
But with one rock of pure earth you will have no need.


EARTH
Powerful, huge, strong, and hard
This one million ton rock has no end
With mountains and sand as far as the eye can see
It grows over time with each stand and stick
Formed as one this mass has endless power
Blow after blow it will not die
But with the Air in the way it will never rest.


AIR
Fast, wild, light, and quick
This never ending wind will pound you
Faster and faster it spins
When it hits you straight on
You are knocked off your feet into the abyss
Forever you fall feeling a strange feeling
Wind against your skin
Than you realize it was not meant for harm but peace.
Last edited by KronosLord; Jun 2, 2009 at 12:13 AM.
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<Muse> hush little kronos, dont you cry, Muse is gonna sing you a lullaby
Kronos lord that is a great poem and u could be a pro poem maker
Element is Recruiting
Sincerely, GanGuan the Water Mammoth
I made it in like 5 mintues and anything to improve on?
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<Muse> hush little kronos, dont you cry, Muse is gonna sing you a lullaby
Originally Posted by BlackRozez View Post
I will try to rhyme.

what?
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<Muse> hush little kronos, dont you cry, Muse is gonna sing you a lullaby