Current State:


Start of illustration for friends book

that's one tall fella

nice job, but some definition in the body would be nice. particularly in the face/torso

Perspective is wrong, unless he stands in front of a painting of a street?

Other than that, feels a bit uncompleted, I do like the work you did with it but yeh...

Haha yeah, It's uncompleted - not going to be completed.
The perspective is way off - gotta work on that.

Was just a spur of the moment thing ^_^ It's my most complete background to date, so I thought I may as well post it.

I might rework it.. but it's unlikely.

Thanks for the comments though =]

EDIT: Actually, I'm gunna do the original idea I had, A swampish monster.
(Yes, I have one crazy train of thought)


(No, that was not a deliberate ozzy reference)

Looks like some proportion problems man.

I was actually really pleased with the SWAT guys proportions, but upon adding the light - things got blended together.

Anyway - working on a new and improved painting

Updated

Still wrong, the background needs to be a LOT more down...

Geez, you guys are straight-minded eh?
I like the look of this corza. (Yes, i noticed some perspective problems too)
It's interesting. Comments like "background needs to be down" I would just ignore. There's more than one way to draw \o. Cheers.

ive tried to make stuff like this, but it always phails... nice pic